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I just wanted to tell you, how much it meant,
When I was sad or lonely, the best wishes you always sent.

When I was happy, you were happy too,
You cheered me up whenever I felt blue.

You were always there and would listen when I would fight,
Your comforting words would always make it right.

So goes this poem, telling how I feel,
Calling you my sister, always felt real.

It isn't much, but just enough to say;
I thank you for always being there in your own way.

We're millions of miles apart, far across the land,
But just always know that you'll always be my friend.
©2008-2009 =Sonikki-Valentine
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I kind of like this, though to me it sounds a bit sappy and sort of like a greeting card...

Anyway, this poem could go to a bunch of people, really.
But it's dedicated to one good friend of mine.
And she knows who she is.
So don't ask me who it's for, I won't say.
I don't want to hurt feelings, or make people think otherwise, so I'm not putting who it's for here.

It's not a love poem, but more of a friendship one, so if it sounds iffy, I'm sorry.

So I'm done talking about my poem now.
I really am sorry it's more like a greeting card than a actual poem. I just wrote what came to mind and fixed it up.


And to that one person that reads it:
If you figure out exactly who it's for, please don't say it here. If you wanna say something, send me a note.

~Sonikki


No critique is welcome.

Writing is copyright to me.
Do not use or put elsewhere without my permission.
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Thank you~ And thanks a lot for the fave as well. ^_^

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We love you... hora sekaijuu ja ima kono shunkan mo dareka ga dareka wo aishiteru.
-Miyavi -We Love You ~Sekai Wa Kimi Wo Aishiteru~

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your realy welcome.
that's so sweet! <3

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It\'s like life is happening all around me- people are moving on, things are changing- but I\'m still in the same place, in the world of the dead, when all I really want to do is feel alive again.
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Aww, thank you, Rhea~ :hug:
I'm glad you like it!

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We love you... hora sekaijuu ja ima kono shunkan mo dareka ga dareka wo aishiteru.
-Miyavi -We Love You ~Sekai Wa Kimi Wo Aishiteru~

Icon made by me~ :D
you're welcome! :hug:
It's so adorable! <3

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It\'s like life is happening all around me- people are moving on, things are changing- but I\'m still in the same place, in the world of the dead, when all I really want to do is feel alive again.
Loverly icon by =Arienell
:icongwomp:
AHSJDHJDH.
*squishes you*
Maybe later, if I get it done and get off my butt, you'll get to see what being bored, happy and optimistic does to me. :lmao:

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We love you... hora sekaijuu ja ima kono shunkan mo dareka ga dareka wo aishiteru.
-Miyavi -We Love You ~Sekai Wa Kimi Wo Aishiteru~

Icon made by me~ :D
XDDD I know that feeling!

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It\'s like life is happening all around me- people are moving on, things are changing- but I\'m still in the same place, in the world of the dead, when all I really want to do is feel alive again.
Loverly icon by =Arienell
AWwwww.......

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"*almost wants to poke one of Motoko's shiny bewbs*"
"Well, they ARE shiny, and I'm pretty sure they'd be fun to poke."
"I was talking about the clothing." ~Sonikki and me

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